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IS IT LOVE:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:29:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hurt so deeply over you,
i couldn't see the truth.
deep down inside i die quitely hoping
to be with you.
i say to myself
lord let her be ready to except my apology
i took away anew.
i long to hear your sweet melody voice.
ringing in my ear.
love is strong smart and true
lets remember too.where ever you go
i'll alway know your the one for me.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-11-09 16:29:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IS IT LOVE:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:57:39 PM AEST (User
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This touched me and wrenched my heart. I remember that feeling once and it wasn't pleasant at the time.
I hope it all works out.
I liked your poem.
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Re: IS IT LOVE:
(User Rating: 1 ) by givingin on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:48:33 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading that poem it was very touching,
I hope it works out....
*~givingin~*
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