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Wall Of Yesterday
Contributed by
jaeann
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:17:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Brought to heighths of unforeseen delight
all at once she sees with sixth sight.
Left to be shelved upon the forest floor
no one arrives to just simply adore.
The colors alight and dance in her head
her mind is calm yet her body feels dead.
The trees spew forth their spindly arms
trapped in the base, struggling from harm.
Darkened rain falls upon the steps
evil stole the place where her soul was kept.
Shadows fall and puzzles click
as the memories fade then crudely stick.
Anger's repressed and pain is imbued
as the journey surrenders her righteous feud.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-11-09 16:17:03]
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Re: Wall Of Yesterday
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:21:54 PM AEST
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| Well written, lovely, sad and dark. Great write. |
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Re: Wall Of Yesterday
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:54:30 PM AEST
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nicely done with a hint of sadness hope all is well with you
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Re: Wall Of Yesterday
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:13:34 AM AEST
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You write of such sadness....and it makes me worry about you.
This is another dark wonder from your pen.
very well done
Roses
Larry |
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