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Death In Tears

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I miss you
like the flower misses the rain
Each day without you
drives me insane
I sit here thinking
"how could you cause so much pain?"

I mean I have been through this before
I never cared about what was to come
I never thought I could love
How could I be so dumb?

I never realized
until I saw the tears
you were what I have been looking for
through all these years

They say spring will follow snow
but in my loneliness I feel so cold
After the drugs and the pain
I feel so old

I'm so close now
I'm almost dead
I only thought of you
as I bled
from where the bullet
left it's mark
12 gauge slug
straight through my heart

But I live still
the hole won't go away
maybe I'll try again
another shot, another day

Another tear
Another try
In all my days,
I never meant to make you cry
I'll be *****
if the next shot don't make me die

I have a loaded gun
and an empty life
if the next few shots don't work
I'll try the knife
I never wanted
to see you cry
"Please lord
just let me die!"




Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-11-09 16:13:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Death In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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wow... this was a really sad write... had me in tears... great job.
~screwup


Re: Death In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:14:05 PM AEST
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Very deep write full of heart ach and pain. It flowed very nicely in a very sad way. Tears of love flow through this write. I hope things get better. And you keep writing your thoughts so this hole will only be a spot. "NICE WRITE". "crash"



~~DENNIS~~


Re: Death In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by bematt2000 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:49:29 PM AEST
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hey dumbass its your homie matt juist writting u to say nice pome i like it


Re: Death In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:25:07 AM AEST
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Very deep. I can say i have had many feelings like this just in different ways. This poem was very well written and the emotions just flowed from the words you have written.

~ :: christina :: ~




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