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Truck load
Contributed by
chocolate_girl
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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For some it's just a nuggle,
others a simple quibble.
for some its even a load!
I can't help but wonder,
if these things that i ponder
should drive me right right down the road!
..........................................................................like this
Not up the wall
...............................as some might say
It's worse, more than a fall
If this truck gets fuller it will crash
So for this i want to lie down
take off of my face this bluntened frown
But theres no time! Too much to do! I must dash!
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2004-11-09 15:46:55]
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Re: Truck load
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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Well this certainly brought back memories. But keep writing because it will help to de-stress you during the heavy times when you meet yourself coming and going and you don't get to sleep for two days during exams.
You have a nice sense of humor and it shows in your poem.
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Re: Truck load
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by 8kiwi8 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:43:20 AM AEST
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| well done:-) i like the ending, how you put the whole point of the poem into 'action' ( if that makes sense) well done x x x |
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