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another love one
Contributed by
chocolate_girl
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:38:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To love you is to fear you,
To cry when your away
To see you in my every thought
To want you everyday
To love you is an addiction
To crave you makes me ill
Every look I lay upon you
Makes my whole world stand still
To love you fills me up inside
…..even when I am not full
I love to feel your skin so warm
On strings of my heart you pull
To love to hear you is a living dream
Of words I've heard before
To touch you is a dangerous drug
That leaves me needing more
To smell u takes my every breath
I get lost in your cologne
To love you is to hurt inside
Whenever I'm alone
To argue is still a virtue
To remind us that if we,
Did not controvert
You wouldn’t be my baby
To taste your lips leaves me numb
To hold you makes me whole
To love you is to need you;
To know you move my soul
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2004-11-09 15:38:45]
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Re: another love one
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:15:21 PM AEST
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Wow!! I just love this, you've captured that L word very well. Good rhyming, well done.
Ali xx |
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Re: another love one
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by Irish on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:25:11 PM AEST
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| Very nice piece. I enjoyed it very much. The verse style you used is one that I enjoy using myself; very simple and easy to work with, yet able to catch a writers thoughts and words very well. Keep up the good stuff. |
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Re: another love one
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by 8kiwi8 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:41:13 AM AEST
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| WOW!really!this is really great! i dont really know exactly what to say about it but it's really great!!! |
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