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Phoenix Rising
Contributed by
Irish
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:37:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Out the darkness,
It rises in me,
The longing to feel,
The want to break free,
To reveal myself to others,
But alas, they cannot see.
Why can't they feel my pain?
From the ashes,
I rise again,
Like a phoenix,
I shall remain,
But even reborn,
I feel the pain.
These scars run so deep...
Beware the fire,
Because it burns,
Destroying beauty,
The flowers and ferns;
As society strikes,
My stomach churns.
Will the pain ever leave me?
Within my heart,
I've lit a fire,
Fueled with passion,
Emotion, desire,
And all the while,
It burns higher.
These feelings may be the end of me...
To change the world,
It is my goal,
To pour out my heart,
To burn the coal,
To let loose my feelings,
Mind, body, and soul.
Can I really make a mark in this world?
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Irish
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2004-11-09 15:37:39]
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by chocolate_girl on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:04:52 PM AEST
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| phwoar! for something written just because u felt like writing! *****in ace. i wish i could decide when i want 2 write, its so soothing but i only can when my mind thinks of summit! dont kno quite what 2 say but good luck in making that mark! |
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:08:55 PM AEST
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| I'm sure you can make your mark. I like the division in this one into stanzas plus one line each, like a chorus but something different each time. Nice! Cheers! |
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