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Business of a Tear
Contributed by
ksprincess42004
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I
Have
Fallen
Down many
A Lover’s face.
I represent inflicted
Pain and healing hearts
My colleagues are numerous
And no less professional than I
We make our living running
Down the saddest faces
Tonight it happens
To be yours
My
Job is
To heal
Numerous pains
From a scratch in the
Eye to a break in the heart
My job is never quite the same
Find comfort in my warm moisture
On your face although it might not
Heal you tonight it will lead the
Way for a new beginning
I can make it just
A bit better
Copyright ©
ksprincess42004
... [
2004-11-09 14:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Business of a Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:25:20 PM AEST (User
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hey!
nicely written.
i like it.
it's very creativly written (with the tear drop shapes, i mean).
awesome. |
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Re: Business of a Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:59:49 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem, nicely written |
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Re: Business of a Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:15:43 PM AEST (User
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Very unique and wonderful! Great job!
Laurie |
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Re: Business of a Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:56:46 AM AEST (User
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This is cool. I don't think I can write poetry like this. I have missed reading your poetry and hope i will see your words again. |
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