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Contributed by
screwup
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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ripping flesh
taring skin
daddy's hitting
me again
fresh cuts
cover old scars
new cuts cover
where the old ones are
dripping red
flowing down
psychotic mind
blocking sound
fires burn
the hell inside
nothing left
forced to die
drown...
in your own blood
and leave me be
don't show me
things I don't want to see
crawling in my skin
raping me
again and again
shoving it in
pushing the blade
making the pain fade
PLEASE... NO
DON'T... IT HURTS
NO DADDY DON'T!!!!
the pain
it is unbearable...
I cannot sleep
I am up in the night
as he holds me down
oh so tight
ripping flesh
taring skin
daddy's coming
to get me again
Copyright ©
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2004-11-09 13:59:49]
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Re: Empty
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:08:39 PM AEST
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!!WOW!! What a write so vivid. It flowed very well to. Such a heart breaking story you tell But it happens a lot in the world today. And it makes me sick how anyone could hurt there own child. This was truly a "GREAT WRITE" it send a message to all who reads it. Thanks for sharing "screwup"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Empty
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:16:05 PM AEST
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| Wow. Powerfull and pretty scary. |
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Re: Empty
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by ksprincess42004 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:41:35 PM AEST
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| An all too vivid and touching poem. Good job! |
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Re: Empty
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:32:02 PM AEST
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i felt frightened just to read this. you're so strong to come through it!
how do you manage?
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Re: Empty
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:46:59 PM AEST
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| this flowed wonderfully and has a lot of emotion...good luck with your dad |
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Re: Empty
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:04:57 PM AEST
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This brought a tear to my eyes, so vivid is the fear and pain. Amazing write!
Laurie |
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Re: Empty
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:45:17 PM AEST
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hey nice write, read some of mine ok and tell me what u think well i g2g bye
DEMON |
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Re: Empty
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:10:18 AM AEST
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powerful, deep, disturbing and scary, a very vivid write here.,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Empty
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by givingin on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:47:22 AM AEST
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So very powerful and sad....
it was very emotional...
I'm sorry people have to go through the life like that.
You must be a very strong person to share topics like that.
*Much love*
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Empty
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:37:15 AM AEST
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Hate to say it but this poem hurt, though the maening within your words differs to my feelings, it just dredged up memories, too long buried, hey no worries, this is not about me.
You alwasy did write so visually, so deep, your words show so many feelings and unbridaled emotions, keep writting...beautiful poem, showing true strength.
Peace be with you
Karl |
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