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That Night

Contributed by wakegurl77 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:55:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

sweat drips down your face
take control of the stage
screem in to the mic
i fell in love that night

minipulate your guitar
while coaxing me through the wall
with your beautiful voice
i fell in love that night

you come to hug me
wet with sweat
melt into your arms
i fell in love that night

placed your pic into my hand
"its a good pic " you say
"actually use it, ok" you smile
i fell in love that night

as i fiddle with your pic
in the middle of class
i fall down to sleep
with sound of your voice
And i'm still in love with you
And i'm still in love with you

i dedicate this poem to someone who was my brothers best friend and was allways around the house. he is in a band and when i saw him i fell in love. he used to play guitar in my brothers room and our walls are very thin so he put me to sleep with the sound of his voice and his acousitc guitar. i can never sleep anymore.

Copyright © wakegurl77 ... [ 2004-11-09 13:55:00]
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Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:46:21 PM AEST
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just for the record i was fourteen when i wrote that and had no concept of love... its pretty much void poem... although ill always remember what a stupid preteen i was oh well.....

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