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Silent Words
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Speaking, crying silent tears
Treated like I'm never here
Feelings, thoughts expressed through words
Go unnoticed, are unheard
Fear does not restrain my thoughts
Why speak when all will be forgot
Go through every passing day
Hold in all I have to say
Thoughts to deep to comprehend
With understandance of this land
The dark side, light side come to be
The aspects most neglect to see
If you'd listen let me talk
What I say won't be forgot
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-11-09 13:46:15]
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Re: Silent Words
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:58:23 PM AEST
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So much hurt So much pain within one so young EternalNight. You express your self so well in your words.
And i can hear what you are saying cries for help cries just for some one to listen Just someone to see you the real you And believe me you keep writting the way you do your words will always be known "GREAT POEM"
EternalNight4x.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Silent Words
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:52:37 PM AEST
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excellent poem!
yeah, i think we all feel like this some times.
greatly expressed though! |
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Re: Silent Words
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:35:35 PM AEST
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Oh how I can relate!
My family don't listen to me, don't worry as long as you have friends you'll be ok. We are hearing you, keep talking! Great poem.
Ali xx |
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Re: Silent Words
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:06:46 PM AEST
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i can relate to this poem so well...i always feel as though my words go unnoticed along with the tears that show my pain....excellent job....you expressed it so well.....awesome poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Silent Words
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:36:00 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, i don't know if i can wholey relate to it, but believe me, I know how you feel.... its deep. dammit, all your poems are deep, not that its a bad thing. they make me think... think about life in general. like.... yeah. im going to go read the others now! |
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