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Whispers
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:13:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your whisper...
Pierces the dark
Searching to find me
Breaking the silence
Shattering misconceptions
Clarifying my assumptions
Showing your intentions
Your Whisper...
Caresses my skin
Tracing my curves
Learning my body
Creating your slut
Moulding your love
Making me beautiful
That Whisper...
Captures my soul
Holding me within you
As you are within me
Binding my passion
Imprisoning my intentions
Selecting my love for yours
Embodying all that we are…
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_Raspberry_
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2004-11-09 13:13:56]
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Re: Whispers
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:14:30 PM AEST
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that was beautiful, really beautiful,wow,
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Re: Whispers
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:38:59 PM AEST
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beautiful write.. Love is wonderful to feel.. I hope you can always keep this feeling..
great job at expressing love
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Whispers
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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well as other have said, this is truely beautiful and lovely.
nice use of words and flow.
wonderful write. loved it.
5 stars
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Re: Whispers
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by macmcgovern on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:39:27 PM AEST
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Powerful, beautiful write. Expression, passion, love it all.
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