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Fading Smile
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:05:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My smile is fading so fast,
Please for once let it last,
Let me be happy for a little while,
Let me at least get to enjoy my smile.
But it gets ripped away stolen from me,
All I ask is to be able to feel free,
My face has forgotten the happy times,
My life is filled with all sorts of grime.
I try to hold onto it with both my hands,
But never up to my hurt can it stand,
All I ever wish for upon my little star,
Is that this time my smile will go so far.
But it never, ever seems to stay,
Something always chases it away,
Frightens it off never for it to return,
I am left empty & feeling the burn.
I would love to smile from ear to ear,
But smile fades when pain comes too near,
It slips through my hands I can’t keep a hold,
Down the blue river my smiles have been sold.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-09 13:05:55]
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Re: Fading Smile
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:34:46 PM AEST
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| Keep trying, you never know the power of that smile. I hope it gets easier to keep soon. *hugs* |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:40:30 PM AEST
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wow .. great expression in this poem.. I totally understand this feeling.. You feel like you are happy but it goes away or is taken away.. sometimes you realize later on that what you thought made you happy really wasn't right and your glad it didn't last .. so think of the better side of it .. there is always hope
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:02:03 PM AEST
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Unique and sublime poem
Beautiful a great read
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:00:06 PM AEST
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| another excellent rite pixie, you really have the nac for writing don't you? |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:17:21 PM AEST
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| hope it comes back pix..I know how you feel..I'm in the same boat..:-( lost mine too.. |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:38:04 PM AEST
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wonderful poem... i always enjoy your work and i always appriciate your comments
allymp |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:17:42 PM AEST
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| great poem! i like reading your work |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:04:45 AM AEST
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I HATE IT WHEN THAT HAPPENS! WHAT CAN YOU DO?! GIVE IT A TRY & ERASE THOSE CRIES!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by Catalina on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:55:22 AM AEST
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So very talented you are indeed! I love reading your writes. I love this one especially because I relate so well right now.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: Fading Smile
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:29:27 AM AEST
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Sensational, that was terrific. What an absaloute treasure. Yes I think I enjoyed. It was beautiful. Each verse swept me away to the next one. And what a perfect title you choose. A+ Girl, its a winner.
What an enjoyable read. Keep them coming.
Corinna |
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