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Perfect Sin
Contributed by
jaeann
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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......her rage is being set
with a stage full of lights
she's anted up her bets
as her mind is going tight
the doors are always spinning
her conscious has been on stuck
she's not the one who's winning
for she's run all out of luck
her rocky trail of trust
has fallen through the cracks
sanity's no longer a must
because she's way off those tracks
a path much too familiar
the strings break every time
her journey quite peculiar
perfect sin for every crime
she'll never find it all
the psyche has given up
it's an order way too tall
and she's heard hearts never trump
she's way out on the line
a notch in some forgotten post
no more change left for her dime
she'll just fly around and coast
it's a gamble for a dollar
with no energy to foot the bill
no one near to hear her holler
no hand left to ease the chill
she's on board for the taking
feast or famine is the deal
no more wishes are forsaking
her quest for feeling real
a pathway set to ease the pain
atleast to carry half the load
she'll not drown in the pouring rain
she'll just stay in empty mode
she hurts too much to give anymore
she hides it all behind a mask
giving them all what they're waiting for
a painted smile to triple her task
she feeds the body to nourish the soul
but she's always only half way there
she'll garnish the sin and stage the roll
and curse the hand drawn for being unfair
her rage is settling ground now
as the siren cracks her whip
her flight has left her unbound somehow
without a chalice from which to sip..........
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jaeann
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2004-11-09 12:57:52]
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Re: Perfect Sin
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:00:00 PM AEST
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wow the flow and the wording was so perfect, very well written,
takecare,
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Re: Perfect Sin
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:51:32 PM AEST
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Love the name and the poem!! Most excellent, jaeann! I enjoyed this very much! Thank you for sharing this piece with us, and revealing a bit of your soul. Wonderful flow, vivid images... All in all, perfect! Great Job! Pen on, dear poet!
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Re: Perfect Sin
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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| Breath taking..excellent flow..:-) venkat |
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