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Into Darkness
Contributed by
givingin
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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INTO DARKNESS
Falling into darkness,
I hear a voice call out,
I sit up so suddenly,
then begin to shout.
Help me please,
free my soul,
from this bottomless pit of sin.
I need your help,
to set me free,
before I totally give in.
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givingin
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2004-11-09 12:16:37]
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Re: Into Darkness
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:57:12 PM AEST
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Such a call for help. It's within your self not to give in. This is a good write it rimes vey well flows nicly together "givingin" Just keep on writing it should help you to win over the sadness within.
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Re: Into Darkness
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:48:22 AM AEST
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Hmm,short and spooky,I like it.
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Re: Into Darkness
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 02:05:00 PM AEST
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It creates a good visual, I like it. I can see picture, even though you don't really use descriptive words. Great poem.
Take care.
David |
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