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That day
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I walked tripping in the air
towards him,
into his smile.
I was sweet and smiled at the world.
But my world
turned its back at me.
My quiet body
my silent lips,
they hid clumsily
my soul in tumult.
My heart hurted,
my heart cried.
Blood dripped from my thoughts,
and they screamed,
tearing June's silence:
"Underneath his hands
I'd be a goddness!"
Heavy heart,full of pain
went on living inside me.
"His love's everywhere in me"
here it was,the latest daylight,
and the moment
was coming.
I breathed thoroughly,
thinking:
"For him,
I'm just a shifty shadow...
but at least I'm true and alive."
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-20 10:40:00]
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Re: That day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:37:01 AM AEST
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| Good poem but it's rather sad... |
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Re: That day
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:38:31 PM AEST
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Oh this is so sad, i like the last
line where it says but at least i'm
true and alive, Thanks for sharing
this one i enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: That day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:13:43 AM AEST
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Another good one!!!
Jenni |
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