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Suffocating
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:17:43 AM in AEST
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I feel like I am suffocating,
Like my soul is separating,
I don’t feel like I am altogether here,
& I can feel something frightening near.
I can’t breathe I feel like I’m dying,
Feels like my pain is multiplying,
Closing in & sealing my doom,
It circulates all around the round.
I have no means or ways of escape,
Torment has chosen me to rape,
It leaves me feeling black & blue,
Creeps around my body just like the flu.
It plagues me fills me with infection,
I no longer have a sense of direction,
Here in the atmosphere I just float,
I have been made a pain filled scapegoat.
People just stand around as I die,
Not even bothering to say goodbye,
I am suffocating in my own pain & hurt,
Slowly withering into the dirt.
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pixie
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2004-11-09 11:17:43]
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Re: Suffocating
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by pander on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:25:41 AM AEST
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My dear Pixie,
This is such emotional stuff. Like someone has shot a crossbow straight through my heart. Such feeling!
Wel done once again.
Pander
xxxx
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Re: Suffocating
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:31:57 PM AEST
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wow, really.....wow,
I can understand how you feel.
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We have a few things in common you and I, you see, my mother was also adopted, and it was hell for her...
I don't know how it was for you, but just remember your not alone |
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Re: Suffocating
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:35:27 PM AEST
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I totally understand this feeling.. this is a great expression.. another great write pixie
Peace
JENNI |
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Re: Suffocating
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:59:14 AM AEST
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my eyes are moistured to read this.. such pain & hurt you are experiencing...
Aww..my dear friend ..big hugs..take care :-) venkat |
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