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Painful Goodbye
Contributed by
alexb
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:35:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im going away now
Your life will be better
Better off alone
Im leaving you here now
Here to be happy
Happier by the phone
Im shutting my eyes now
Blocking the tears from
Pouring for my lies
Im letting a sigh now
Hoping I die now
Stop to let me cry
A feeling so empty
Go with it
A life shattered simply
Stop this
Madness
Im writing this down now
Cant explain my feelings
Toward all of what is you
Im feeling your pain now
Stop bringing me down
Let me do my dues
Im letting us die now
You're dying without me
I know the pain in goodbyes
Im letting a sigh now
Hoping I die now
Stop to let me cry
Stop asking why!
A feeling so empty
Go with it
A life shattered simply
Stop this madness
Im leaving you now..................
please don't cry
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alexb
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2004-11-09 09:35:42]
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Re: Painful Goodbye
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:47:05 AM AEST
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sad and moving, great emotions.,
pixie xx |
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Re: Painful Goodbye
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:06:36 AM AEST
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| So sad... A very emotional write. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Painful Goodbye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:44:51 PM AEST
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wow you can feel the pain in this write.. i got a lil misty eyed reading it.. Goodbyes are painful sometimes... but someone always gets hurt.. sorry it all had to end for you .. I wish you the best but a very good write indeed
Peace and hope
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Re: Painful Goodbye
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by flash_16 on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:55:29 PM AEST
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great write! i was feeling from were u came from even tho im a girl....it was very emotional1 im here if you need to talk
jen |
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Re: Painful Goodbye
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:27:48 AM AEST
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| i love this poem... i realize its been a while for you since you wrote it, but its amazing. my bf just broke up with me and this just like, helps me understand how he felt about it. i love yer writing! great job on this one |
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