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Fallen Star
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:07:09 AM in AEST
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A wish was whispered
As I reached out to catch my falling star
There was no surprise
When it slipped through my fingers
And shattered on the cold ground
Now it lies in pieces at my feet
My pretty blue eyes
Won't shed a single crystal drop
But my fingertips will cry rivers
Of vivid scarlet tears
As I gather up the shards
Of my broken dreams
With their edges like razors
The cuts are sure to run deep
Morning will find the ground
Stained red with my blood
Copyright ©
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-11-09 09:07:09]
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Re: Fallen Star
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:29:51 AM AEST
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that was really sad and beautifully written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Fallen Star
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by alexb on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:49:14 AM AEST
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| Very haunting and sad, and also very good. |
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Re: Fallen Star
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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| Fantastic job! Very emotional. |
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