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They Don't Know
Contributed by
etrojan08
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:41:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There's that kid again
He's walking that same road
He's dreaming of what he might become
He dosen't know that his dreams are false
He dosen't know that he is hated
He dosen't know
There's that teen again
He dosen't know that he is misunderstood
he dosen't know that his peers don't like him
He dosen't know that his voice matters
He dosen't know that his thoughts are evil
He dosen't know
There's that man again
He dosen't know that his life is false
He dosen't know that his feelings mean nothing
He dosen't know that he is going to die alone
He dosen't know that his is unwanted
He dosen't know
That kid dosen't know
That teen dosen't know
That man dosen't know
Do you know?
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Re: They Don't Know
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:19:57 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done. |
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Re: They Don't Know
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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a very good write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: They Don't Know
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:05:51 PM AEST
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Great write. so many question he will find out some day. I know I did This write makes me think glad i found it "VERY WELL WRITTEN"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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