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Wish
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sunlight dances through your eyes
Painting so majestically
A rainbow to magnify you wholly
Kissing your lips ever so softly
Your hair shimmering in gold, so bright and bold
With a gaze of enchantment
A beckoning trance
Forever am I swayed
By the beauty you have laid
Consuming my every thought
I twitch with pure emotion
A fantasy ever sought
Becomes my lifetime devotion
Copyright ©
bonita2689
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2004-11-09 08:30:05]
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Re: Wish
(User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:40:51 AM AEST
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Nice write Lot's of feeling. True heart felt emotion I liked it.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Wish
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:48:10 PM AEST
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| very good and well written |
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Re: Wish
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:14:28 PM AEST
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| may your every wish come true |
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