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Evil Soft and Sweet
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:27:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Looking at me, what do you see? Your eyes blur my reality
You see full lips and curvaceous hips, and want to completely devour me
But perception is a wicked trick, some what slick, to be had by the mind
A twisted joke, clouds vision like smoke, something beautiful you did find
Lovely soft skin, inviting you in, that appears to be kissed with dew
Long eye lashes, as your heart thrashes, simply intrigue and tantalize you
A smile so sweet, swept off your feet, believing that I am the one
But once again, I tell you my friend, it is like staring at the sun
If you look too deep, your eyes will weep, and sight will soon be gone
For I am no creature, with one pure feature, to feast your gaze upon
Tainted smile, been that way for a while, and a conscience beginning to decay
Broken emotions, keep hate in perpetual motion, how it will forever stay
Blackened heart of night, torments with delight, and scars the weak and kind
A wicked soul, with only one heinous goal, to take over your mind
So step a little more near, do not have fear, for you are already in my sight
Try not to run, and spoil the fun, there's no need to put up a fight
Far from the pretty girl you thought, now a lesson here must be taught, trust no one
For I am the wicked, spoiled and sickened, my mind has come undone
My beauty pulls you in, as parasites burrow under skin, heading straight for your heart
I will undoubtedly use, and ferociously abuse, lacerating it apart
So now what do you see, when you look at me, do your eyes see what lies within?
For I am an evil soft and sweet, and yes I will sweep you off your feet, but then the trauma begins...
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Rxqueen
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2004-11-09 07:27:37]
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:30:39 AM AEST
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| I'm in a disgusting mood I guess..sounds like you think too much of your own looks.. I haven't slept in 2 days and I've been crying for 3..so I'm probably jealous..don't mind me .. just an old hen. |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:41:15 AM AEST
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mmm very good write, well expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:46:01 AM AEST
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| an interesting style and a lovely poem |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:54:24 AM AEST
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This gave me chills. I have seen such evil in human form. BRRRR! An excellent write.
Stitch |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:03:13 AM AEST
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This is chilling. I am at a loss for words.
Kie |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:21:40 PM AEST
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Sounds like my cousin?
Powerful poem
Wonderful
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Evil Soft and Sweet
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by Black13 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 08:04:12 AM AEST
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| Ooooh, I liked. Very interesting write and it shows the true intentions of people to me at times. |
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