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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:43:48 AM AEST
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I like the way the words have a layed back tilt to them, makes the poem feel real, and Id do the same if it rains, then no mowing for me if it freezes only the fire will my body see.
Beautifully written write, enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:42:56 AM AEST
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Hey girl, you ought to come to the islands..where ths grass is always green..:>)
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:05:33 AM AEST
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This had a bluesie lyrical feel to it.
Oh and I liked the Arkansas saying, by the way.
I also like the outlook you have on life, alot of positivity and strength.
Keep writing poetry Em.
Kie |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:30:15 PM AEST
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Fabulous Emy. My lawn needs doing alas it is to wet to do. Been raining loads here in the uk.
I hope your back gets better. Isuffer with mine quite a lot so i sympathise with you
Rest up.. time for the grass when you get better
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:48:19 PM AEST
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Great work emy love the arkansas saying, in England ours should be something like:
if you don't like the weather bloody get used to it!
good work as always.
Johnny. |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:01:22 PM AEST
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We have the same saying up here in Calgary Canada
I liked this poem
I hate cutting the grass
Good stuff |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:12:57 PM AEST
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| We had a bit of snow last weekend, now it's almost gone. This was a great write Emy. Just go with the flow of things. LOL Sorry. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: GO AHEAD FREEZE???
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by girish on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:04:56 AM AEST
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hello emy,
my sister has just come to US to continue her studies with MS. she also told that its very chill but she could get used to it.
nice write although i could understand the substance but for the words "motha,botha" i find them new
girish |
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