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More is better?
Contributed by
row
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:56:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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guess loneliness ain't too bad
guess people ain't so sad
guess darkness can look good
guess some aren't understood
could be more
so much more
more is better?
leave it on an early setter
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row
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2004-11-09 02:56:19]
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Re: More is better?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:47:18 AM AEST
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| Sometimes more is better, but most time less is preferred, cool write nice and short and to the point i like it. |
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Re: More is better?
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by girish on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:33:27 AM AEST
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short & sweet fine
so you have even concised your poem for not wanting more lines.
girish |
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