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Thieve's of Loyalty
Contributed by
DesperateSoul
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:58:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Thieve's of Loyalty
Your heart pounds with rage,
they call themselves friends,
they pretend to have already
read the book,but don't know
any of the word's on your page...
Sneak up on you,in broad daylight,
as if it were an alleyway,in the
Pitch Black Night,
Take your good intentions and your
LOYALTY
and scar your soul just 4 spite..
Giving and giving,
so much of yourself,
To build their ego's up
and give their self esteem
Richness and wealth,
And at the same time,
their taking from your
Soul's Treasure Chest
And doing it in,
Smooth Stealth.....
Copyright ©
DesperateSoul
... [
2004-11-09 01:58:58]
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Re: Thieve's of Loyalty
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:09:40 AM AEST
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| too true sometimes..good job. I like your user name..it sounds the way I feel..:-( |
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Re: Thieve's of Loyalty
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by namesaretaken on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:41:51 AM AEST
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| It sad to think that so called friends can do such things. This was a good poem it reminded me of the song "The Backstabbers " by the O'jays I liked the last stanza the best good job. |
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Re: Thieve's of Loyalty
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:00:03 PM AEST
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| very expressive poem and very true....keep up the good writing |
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