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A COLD BLANK STARE
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:31:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A cold blank stare has he.
No emotion, No thought.
As he is led away by the
law of the land.
His crime a crime of the
heart.
A death caused by fear.
A death that should not
have happened.
A cold blank stare has he.
No feeling, No soul.
As he has to face a life in
prison.
Not just of his flesh but
of his all, Mind and sprit.
In cased, In the death of his
love, His mate, That part
of him that made him
whole.
A cold blank stare has he.
Nothing said, Nothing heard.
As the verdict of death comes
down to him.
Still, No emotion, No feelings.
Just that blank stare into
space.
Death for him shall be a better
place.
A cold blank stare has he.
As they strap him into the chair.
A tear falls from his eye not
for himself, Not for his
death.
For her his wife a death he
caused, His sorrow, His grief.
He knows it shall be lifted
by death.
As GOD said it would be
his promise to set him free.
A cold blank stare has he.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
... [
2004-11-09 01:31:51]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: A COLD BLANK STARE
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:41:15 AM AEST
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Very powerfull write here.
It jus blows me away. I hope it's not true but if it is then God bless u. Your writng is very moving.
Reminds me of someone els I knew when he was growing up but he got the lethel injection.
Also I have a nepheiw that is jail 4 shooting hiw wifes boyfriend after they were separated.
Even killing someone else is for givable.
I luv the way u wrote this as I'm sure it will touch all that read it.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: A COLD BLANK STARE
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:54:06 AM AEST
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Bravo very well written, its so powerfull i love the tought you poured in to it.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: A COLD BLANK STARE
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:58:23 AM AEST
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| Very intense and hauntingly visual, painting deep pictures and images, a chilling feeling within the write, beautiful poem, awesome reading. |
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Re: A COLD BLANK STARE
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:20:59 AM AEST
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This is a deep tragic poem. Very well wriiten. It moved me in ways i have never felt before.
Blessed be
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~
( christina ) |
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Re: A COLD BLANK STARE
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:26:36 PM AEST
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AWWW *tear* I loved this poem dennis ^.^
yet another awesome poem, I can't believe how good you are.
*~Alicia~* |
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