|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tonight Off
Contributed by
Lessa
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:36:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
|
Hair of nightly raven black
streaks of stars and moonbeams
this the night's beauty that lay befor me,
clouds up high so far away
merly covering Orian's chest
The Mama Bear calls baby
baby chases after
this all happens as i lay here on the grass
thinking of nights long since past
wishing the sky would go by slower
how long has it been since I could lay
on the ground holding on so so i didnt float away
I goto work so i can pay
my bills my taxs and food for the day
i work my 8 then run away
so i can sleep and eat and clean my life away
The night shes whispering sweet nothings to me
letting me rest.....
letting me forget.....
letting me stay awake and dream
tonights my day off, i have 2 in a row this week
so i lay awake holding on to the grass
watching mama bear call baby
watching baby chase after
Copyright ©
Lessa
... [
2004-11-08 22:36:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tonight Off
(User Rating: 1 )
by girish on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:46:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
have more leisures my dear friend
both mama and baby will be there for all nights i wish they should also hear to your poem i have written poems expressing virtues to be adhered in life but such nature poem is fine
thanks
girish
|
|
|
Re: Tonight Off
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:05:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Read this slowly and drink in every word. I've been crying for three days..and your poem made me smile..thank you very, very much. |
|
|
Re: Tonight Off
(User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:33:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is a good read, it brought a tear to my eye of days long gone. Thank you for sharing |
|
|
Re: Tonight Off
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:34:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| That was beautiful I read it twice. It has an undescribable feeling/vibe to it that hit spot deep with in. Wonderfully written. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
