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False Joy
Contributed by
Delusions_of_Grandeur
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Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 05:58:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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For a while I was happy,
I could truely claim to be,
and now the act is back on,
though i hope no one will see.
Still, there are occasionally moments,
when my grin is not forced,
but they are far too few and scattered,
and quickly fade back to self remorse.
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2002-07-19 05:58:04]
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Re: False Joy
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 04:36:20 PM AEST
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I liked this alot
beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: False Joy
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by DIOGENES on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 01:18:14 PM AEST
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"Smile though your heart is breaking....." as the song goes. This could well be the mantra for many of us.
Your lyrics, phrasing & meter allowed for a very smooth read & pronounced theme. Very well done.
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