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ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
Contributed by
destinyfate
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:44:38 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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You are the first thing I crave when I awake.
You are the first step of the day I make.
Longing, starving,needed you so much.
Shaking up from the slightest touch.
Without you I wouldn't stand a chance.
My soul is on fire from this bleeding romance.
You are the blood in my veins.
Driving me crazy but keeping me sane.
Cant be without you, wouldn't stand a chance..
Never had nothing on going as this bleeding romance.
8-18-04
Tonya L. Turner
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destinyfate
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2004-11-08 20:44:38]
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:56:05 PM AEST
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Awesome masterpiece.
Great writing.
It very rarely takes me over five minetes to write a write.
Keep doing wat cha doin 'cause this one is great!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by Solnubis on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:13:39 AM AEST
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| This made me think of the romance i have with food. The compulsion to want it morning, noon, and night, when I can't deal with what's going on in my head or my emotions are all in a rampage. It's funny I could have thought of you speaking about a man or woman, but what I thought of what the feeling you have towards an addiction whether it be food, drugs, ro alcohol. When poetry makes me think like this I enjoy reading it very much. |
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by Sinned on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:37:43 PM AEST
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Sounds like an unfed passion.
A wake up dream
A bottle of wine
Morning coffee and needed caffine
An addition to something like cocain
Whatever I liked the sensation
I enjoyed your poem Ongoing Bleeding Romance
It was smooth as a love song
Keep writting you can't go wrong
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:42:01 PM AEST
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| "Driving me crazy but keeping me sane." Now *that* I can relate to. I like this in spite of how short it is. Must be one of those poems that just came to you from the muse. Cheers! |
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by Ali on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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| Someone could use these as their wedding vows I'm sure :) |
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Re: ONGOING BLEEDING ROMANCE
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:47:29 AM AEST
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Great poem.. I loved this.. It was amazing...
take care
christina |
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