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THE HOLLUTION
Contributed by
sandeepisvgreat
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM in AEST
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Irritating
Cracking crows
On the hundred storied
Cemented tree
Of the bloody
Polluted city
Where reside
Ants, flies and no pity
Black nightly hair
Mighty blacker air
Coughing, spitting, weeping
The ugly
Mod Humanity.
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2004-11-08 20:37:07]
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Re: THE HOLLUTION
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
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Wow!
I live in the Country but have spent time away in big city's.
This write is a briliant masterpeice.
Don't think anyone else could ever say it this well.
luv, huggs, smiles, hang tuff,
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Re: THE HOLLUTION
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by Lessa on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:50:49 PM AEST
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| wow, awsome |
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Re: THE HOLLUTION
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by Solnubis on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:16:58 AM AEST
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| Very well written. A little thought provoking, which means you have to read it a few times to get the just of it. |
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Re: THE HOLLUTION
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by Sinned on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:01:39 PM AEST
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Cow munere fills the air
Culivated muddy fields
Chicken poop scattered here & there
Too wet too dry little yield
Aunts gnats worm & creep crawlers
Apple orchard three dollars a bushel
Party lines & too many callers
I liked your poem very much---Write more
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