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Tears Falling Up
Contributed by
evil_angel
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:45:05 PM in AEST
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i cant take it anymore.
i just want to cry.
lifes getting so hard,
i just want to die.
you say we're best
but you always lie.
after every single fight
i try to let out a sigh.
not a aigh of relief
but a sigh of good-bye.
good-bye to the times
our feelings just fly.
they fly all the way up..
all the way to the sky.
i just want to come down.
i dont want to be so high.
so just leave me alone
please just let me cry.
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2004-11-08 19:45:05]
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Re: Tears Falling Up
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:02:40 PM AEST
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Very sad but greet writing. Awesomely creative. Sometimes we jus need to cry it out. It's when we can't cry that people needs to watch out.
Great write.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Tears Falling Up
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by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:18:09 PM AEST
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| so emotional and vulnerable. keep writing...very nice poetry here. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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