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Why Do I?
Contributed by
dragonluvsong
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:43:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I miss this thing that wasn’t that great,
but I don’t understand why I have this fate.
I was badgered and cursed at,
now why would I want that?
I cried, and it hurt so bad;
almost everyday I was feeling sad.
Now there is something that didn’t change.
I am still feeling really sad,
to think I would no longer feel this bad.
I cut from my life what caused me this pain,
but now it is just driving me insane.
I feel so lonely that I start to miss,
what made me feel worthless.
It isn’t worth my thought,
I don’t want to be caught.
I don’t want to waste my time,
I want to start to feel just fine.
I know that I don’t miss what I had,
because I would not want to feel that bad.
I just miss having that someone there,
with whom time I could share.
If only there was a mystical way
that, with him I could have stayed.
But really, it didn’t match up.
He didn’t like the same things as I,
didn’t want to try.
No respect was had,
he was convinced that I was bad.
No trust given to me,
what was to be?
I was ready to give my all,
and he would have let me fall.
But I was supposed to change for him.
so small minded
drug addict-drunk
antisocial-immature
selfish-egocentric
I didn’t like these traits,
they made me learn to hate.
And it’s finally over,
I no longer run for cover.
I can go on now,
to him I would have never bowed.
Control he would not have had,
that would have been very bad.
Independence is my hero,
with you I would have been zero.
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dragonluvsong
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2004-11-08 19:43:22]
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Re: Why Do I?
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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Very sad but yet a masterpeice in its own right as this write will help others realize. I can tottaly relate cause I went thru this with my last ex.
awesome.
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Re: Why Do I?
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by Hollie85 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:52:26 PM AEST
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| I really like the last 2 lines, independence is your hero - time will pass and I'm sure you'll find a man 1000 times the man he was. There is now way you should put up with being treated in such away but as they say love is blind. |
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Re: Why Do I?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:50:01 PM AEST
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