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nothing that they'll ever hear
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:31:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she sits and stares at the box of velvet
the ribbon now frayed though once it held it
shes kept it as sentiment, nothing more
before her somber heart knocked on death's door
all that's left is an empty shell
though once a girl she's lost herself
the pain she felt is now long gone
along with the smiles she lived upon
and they still see her every day
though the waves they held have begun to fade
recognition lost of the child they knew
sad and lonely that life is threw
she loved them all with all her heart
they didn't know when they tore it apart
here now, jaded, she's in her room
tears don't come as she faces doom
silly her she didn't know
that sometimes this is the way lives go
but she's tired now and very weary
her mind is clouded so she can't see clearly
so she goes to the pills she's hidden well
behind the curtain on the second shelf
'one of the valium, no three more i think'
she says to herself as she gets water from her sink
but four isn't enough as she fades off to sleep
eight more then maybe she'll fall past the brink
what they've done they'll never know
but they gave her heart it's final blow
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2004-11-08 19:31:07]
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:36:50 PM AEST
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This is so amazing. It's beautiful in all it's sorrow. I applaud you on this. *stands and claps* Wonderful write. Thank you for posting this.
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:49:24 PM AEST
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Very sad but written like a professional.
I do hope this is jus writing.
luv, huggs, strength,
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:19:44 AM AEST
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This is a great write very well done my congerts But i hope this isn't true life??
"GREAT WRITE" innerbeautyqueen.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:25:50 PM AEST
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| such a sad, and tragic write. sounds a LOT like me. |
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Re: nothing that they'll ever hear
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 09:26:21 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written...so sad :( |
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