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Broken
Contributed by
evil_angel
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:29:33 PM in AEST
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i feel like im broken.
a fragile soul lost
in the hands of fate.
im slowly fading away...
like a picture in sun.
does anyone even care
that im leaving?
would anyone care
if i died right now?
now many people
would come to my funeral?
not very many...
im not liked by many.
im not loved by any.
so why cant i die
and end my unhappiness?
no one makes it better.
do me a favor...let me die.
i'll finally be happy.
thats all i ask of you.
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evil_angel
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2004-11-08 19:29:33]
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Re: Broken
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:40:19 PM AEST
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Lovely...and if it hepls...I love you! If you ever need to talk, I'm here for ya!
Love and hugs
Sid |
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Re: Broken
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by BrookeStar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:48:02 PM AEST
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~WOW~ Verry depressing.....But verry good
I Iike it. It just tells me so much so many feeling but not to long so you get lost strait to the point my kind of poetry.
~*Brooke*~ |
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Re: Broken
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:33:19 PM AEST
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Yes it's sad but well written.
It powerfull with feelings we all have at times.
Hang tuff.
I luv u too and u r a good writer. When I first started writing it was wat I call cryiny in the beer, ****.
Keep writing and I wait for the day u realize that u r somebody 'cause God don't make no junk.
This too soon shall pass.
luv, huggs, faith in yourself, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Broken
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by Hollie85 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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| Extremely well written. Someone with such talent surely is loved by many, maybe you jus can't see it. Anyway keep writing - can't wait to read more. |
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