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We like Faery Tales
Contributed by
N0body
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:20:33 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I'm a simple structure.
You're a complicated phrase,
We're all in a story book, titled 'The Never Ending Maze'
We're always surrounding, that feeling we can't find.
Always researching that fragmented sentence,
That was left behind.
Today our chapter is number one,tomorrow its number two,
Five days from now we'll be wondering,
How our story grew.
Its first person, now third, there's just so many opinions to confide,
It just seems we'll we walking straight forever,
Walking straight to colid.
We're forever writing more, never writing less,
But let's not forget,
This story book must end,
some where along this mess.
Copyright ©
N0body
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2004-11-08 18:20:33]
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Re: We like Faery Tales
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by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:25:18 PM AEST
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| Very clever/creative. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: We like Faery Tales
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:52:48 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem, you a great writer keep it up ^^ (P.s You know who this is lol...and if you don't then well you won't know so there lol) |
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Re: We like Faery Tales
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by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:37:22 PM AEST
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| ^_^ Nice, very nice! I really liked it! I can relate to this poem-by the idea. I've thought of life like this before. It's good to know someone out there thinks the same. |
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Re: We like Faery Tales
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by girltranscended on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:48:30 PM AEST
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I'm a simple structure.
You're a complicated phrase,
We're all in a story book, titled 'The Never Ending Maze'
Great opening,
well written and such a home-hitting concept.
*reads again and then goes back to forgetting this all must end (cause I like faery tales too) |
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