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Computers Kill
Contributed by
N0body
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't live on the computer, don't waste your life.
A plug is as deadly as a silver sharp knife.
Don't plug the keyboard into your skull,
Don't let the electricity, electrocute your soul.
Don't plug the mouse into your brain,
Don't put your body through needless pain.
Don't plug the monitor into your back,
You're only causing your bone to crack.
Don't talk to people by sitting in a room,
You're creating your chamber, your silent death tomb.
Don't plug yourself into the puggable wall,
Because even they have a tendancy to fall.
Don't plug yourself in...and electrocute your heart...
....because unlike computers, we can't restart.
Copyright ©
N0body
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2004-11-08 17:46:59]
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Re: Computers Kill
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:02:35 PM AEST
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Well, I love mine and I made a lot of money using it. so call me electric head!
Rita |
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Re: Computers Kill
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by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:20:19 PM AEST
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I really liked the message and the imagery you used! The ending was especially good! ^_^
~Roses are red,
violets are blue,
I love pirates,
Just like you!~
^_~ Ahhh....Juanny Deep |
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Re: Computers Kill
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by N0body on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:07:58 PM AEST
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| Um..i just wanted to say something which I prolly shoulda mentioned when i posted this poem.....tyhis poem is not about how its bad to use computers and how you should be reading or something else....it kinda has a meaning in it that is just really or me (which prolly no one could pick up on or relate to ^_^' ) So i just wanted to say i wasn't trying to get down on people in this poem PARTICULARLY....cuz sadly to say...i use mine 24/7 ^_^'''' |
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