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You
Contributed by
caughtinadream
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 02:58:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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A new portrayal
Of everything I see
Gone is the taunting demon
That I used to be.
These last moments
As I reminisce.
What I wouldn't do
For this mysteries kiss.
I stare in wonder and amazement
At the beauty of you.
Time is dark yet captivating
Until it is through.
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caughtinadream
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2004-11-08 14:58:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Row on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:04:06 AM AEST (User
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nice poem. you've done a good job with the rhyming, and the meaning is real deep |
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