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Who are friends?
Contributed by
sean88
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They stand and watch
My ship go down,
Just talking as if
I hear no sound,
And from there on in
I surely know,
That these so called friends
Are not friend but foe,
For as I sink
No hands are on their way,
To salvage anything
For you see I am nothing but prey,
They take what they need
And are on their way,
But the ship that was left
Cannot be found,
Because after too long
It hits the ground…
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2004-11-08 13:02:26]
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Re: Who are friends?
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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mates like this come and go and the thing is that you never see it comming until it's too late. i know from experiance.
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Re: Who are friends?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:01:43 PM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net!!
If this is a sample of what your poems are gonna be like, you have got yourself a huge fan!! Great write.....Hope to see more soon.
Jenni |
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