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The girl behind the wall
Contributed by
Nixzy
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Down in the cellar buried behind a brick wall,
You can hear a nasty screeching,
A shouting,
A call.
Once upon a time a little girl ran down the stairs,
Dying with depression as she falls over the chairs,
Blurry eyed with dark messed up hair,
Killed without a reason with no one to care.
No one really loved her and didn’t want her around,
So she slept in the gutter waiting to be found,
Her eye liner ran and her bag was getting wet,
Clutching her things to her chest crying out
“Why am I upset.”
She finds an old house and runs through the door,
Catches her hand on a splinter and her veins start to pour,
An old man jumps to his feet and she falls onto the floor,
Passes out and bangs her head and the blood pours out more.
He has no idea what to do with her so he puts her behind a wall,
Every night while he’s sleeping he can still hear her call,
He frets and he shakes and she screams out his name,
Look now old man its not just a game.
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Nixzy
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2004-11-08 12:08:28]
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Re: The girl behind the wall
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by N0body on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:58:18 PM AEST
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| I like how you could get a theme and mood across, and at the same time make this poem into a story. I like very much. |
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Re: The girl behind the wall
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by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:53:06 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem, it had a very unique and original style. Poetry with a story feel to it. ^_^ |
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