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My Worst Enemy
Contributed by
nessiecat
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There's someone I can't live without
and I wish they'd love me more.
If only they believed in me
and could see what others saw.
If they'd just try that bit harder,
take the time to understand
that I am just as capable
and although I don't, I can.
There's someone I can't live without
who is born to criticise.
They never hear the positives,
just the doubt between the lines.
If they'd make more of an effort,
treat me truly as a friend,
the world would be for me to have,
its pathways with no end.
There's someone I can't live without
and I wish they'd take the time
to trust, to love, respect me
as they do close friends of mine.
I often sit and think about
how wonderful it will be
when one day I unlock the door,
one day I find they key.
There's someone I can't live without
and she's with me constantly.
I hear you say "Just throw her out!"
Well, I can't because it's me.
Copyright ©
nessiecat
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2002-11-20 05:20:00]
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Re: My Worst Enemy
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by LJ on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:54:18 AM AEST
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LOL!! Great minds think alike! I guess. This is one of the wierdest things. Your poem is much better than mine and I enjoyed reading it a lot. But, stop coppying me!!! Just joking. I love it!! lol
~LJ |
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Re: My Worst Enemy
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:50:34 AM AEST
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| "it's no surprise to me i am my own worst enemy... cuz every now and then i kick the living **** out of me..." that's the song from Lit i keep thinking on whenever i see that title, and now it seems i'm seeing doubles. you both, good writes!! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: My Worst Enemy
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:32:48 PM AEST
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I thought i just read this somewhere??
LOL i think it's great that you guys wrote
poems with the very same title's that is
so weird, Thanks for sharing this one
I really enjoyed it alot, i know im my
own worst enemy for sure.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: My Worst Enemy
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:50:54 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem ... love the ending! |
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