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Looking out my window
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:35:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking out her window
At the life she knew before
The life she threw away
For the one that she adored
He showed her life beyond what she knew
But now she misses the life she once knew
The life she gave up for him
When he gave up nothing for her
She only knew what she wanted never what she had
And when she got what she wanted
It didn't seem to bad
It was her dream come true
But after she's had it for all of these years
She realizes it's not what she thought
This life she has dreamed up
Has become a nightmare
Looking threw the window
To a life she once knew
A life she used to take for granted
But now she charishes with all her heart
Oh how she wants her life back
But to leave him would be so painful
He's everything she thought she wanted
But nothing to her now
To look at him and see his eyes
Looking back at her
Makes her shiver all over
Just knowing he's looking back at her
She knows he knows she wants to leave
But he would never let her go
He would kill a soul who helped her
Her life has become his own
So she looks out her window
At a life she once knew
Hoping beyond hope
She will get to be a part of it once more
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2004-11-08 10:35:35]
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Re: Looking out my window
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by pixie on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:08:16 PM AEST
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an emotional write, great work,
pixie xx |
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Re: Looking out my window
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:45:46 PM AEST
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| well expressed, overall very well written..if I may make one suggestion try and keep your rhyme skeme (can't spell) constant....ha I'm a hypocrite I do the same thing lol..anyways very good keep it up |
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