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How I Miss You
Contributed by
etrojan08
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:50:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I liked you an then you went an screwed things up
We were good together
How I wish i chould justy hold yer hand when I see you
How I miss you
How I jus wanna hold you close an tell you things
Tell you how much I love you
Tell you that we should never be apart
Tell you that you make me feel all warm an fuzzy inside
How I miss you so much
The good memories are still fresh in my head
The bad things are so uneeded
I want to think bout how we used to hold hands
How good it felt when we kissed
How good you smelled
I didnt care what you had done in the past
This is the present
Only me an you matter now
How I miss you...
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etrojan08
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2004-11-08 08:50:31]
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Re: How I Miss You
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:16:07 AM AEST
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Ok this poem is not to be read when your radio is playing "Take my Breath Away". im crying lol. *takes a handfull if tissue*
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Re: How I Miss You
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by Stitch on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:28:16 AM AEST
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Some work on your spelling could clean this up a bit. The point is in there, but it's a bit muddled. I know these kinds of writes just sort of spill out, but spend a little time cleaning up before you post and it will be more effective.
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