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Reflections
Contributed by
Tamara
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:29:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I dislike mirrors
I don't like their reflection
When I gaze into the silver picture
I disapprove of the reflection
I look into the murky pool
She's as deep as she is wide
Not showing who I am deep down
Causing me to hide
Standing infront of her, she absorbs me
Never judging who I am
I can be who- ever I want to be
She still draws from me what she can
She's there when I succeed
And she's there when I fall
When I go soul-searching
She's the one on whom I call.
I'm becoming more familiar with her
I'm accustomed to her view
She's the only one I trust
To show the image true
Copyright ©
Tamara
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2004-11-08 08:29:39]
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Re: Reflections
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by Mihiri on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:29:38 AM AEST
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Nicely done! I like the way u've changed from ur first point of view without making the transition too obvious, man! I've been trying that 4 aaaaaaages, but couldn't pull it off yet! Well done!!
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Re: Reflections
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by pixie on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:10:41 PM AEST
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well expressed emotional write,i hate mirrors sometimes too,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Reflections
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by travisk on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:37:38 PM AEST
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| well written and understood my friend |
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