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BLACK HEART
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:23:51 AM in AEST
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Can you feel the beauty in others
Love them as you would your mother
Black heart is this what you possess
Always the poor damsel in distress
Jealousy burns you up gets twisted inside
Good and evil fight like Jekyll and Hyde
Lost in shame and a search for power
Looking for your next victim to devour
Trust has gone twisting serpent snake
My family a friend a big huge mistake
Don't play with fire you will get burned
Bad karma lessons to be learned
Do you get off on making others sad
How do you sleep at night being so bad
Live with you bitterness cover it in honey
Look to your conscience love or money
Destroying happiness is what you do best
Make people feel like an unwanted guest
False hugs and kisses not from your heart
Black heart wanting information to impart
Sleep well my cousin let karma be your fate
Learn the difference between love and hate
Discontented whispers speak loud and clear
Three words I love you genuine and sincere
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sweetangeluk
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:45:12 AM AEST
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| This rocked! It read easily and was full of emotion. I reallyloved it, one of the best I have read today! |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by pixie on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:17:29 PM AEST
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this was amazingly expressed, great poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:09:44 PM AEST
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One of the best poems I've read tonight... Great work..
Jenni |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST
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Ah, another flawless endeavor you have so beautifully weaved, sweetangel! Most excellent! I love the analogies and the images that have been placed in these... I understand this feeling you have, for I have one too many family members that are exactly like you have described in this poem... Dreadfully sorry that you must deal with this, and I hope that they will put an end to their doings... Another wonderful write! Raw with emotion, reaching out, and grabbing one by the throat! Thrilling ride! Much love, precious angel! Hope to read another flawless tale of yours soon! Aurevoir for now. Forever,
Flower of Darkness.
Stephy |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:30:55 AM AEST
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Angel, there are people who thrive on confrontation, strirring up things better left sleeping, conniving, instigators and although they probably don't realize it---they are so selfish.
But what is harder is to love this type of person. It isn't easy to love them.
Your poem was magnificent and flawless.
Your poetry always moves me, every time.
Kie |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:57:50 PM AEST
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Girl u tell um-n-I'll pat my foot.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:46:54 PM AEST
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excellent write, my kids have an aunt that is like this and how she can face herself is beyond me! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:52:21 AM AEST
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Wonderful job. I'm half asleep and this poem still makes perfect sense. By the way i forgave my sister. I figured it was sorta childish of me not too. It did hurt, but she is my sister after all. Anyways. I hope things will get better soon. Anywho imma head to bed for now. I will read and comment on more of your poems. Till then. Much love and sweet dreams.
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:05:54 AM AEST
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| Your poem is so right on the mark. Too many people with black hearts exist in this world. Good write! |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:42:57 PM AEST
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I like this.
Your words draw to the intents of a preson's heart. This is a poem to make people think. |
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Re: BLACK HEART
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:59:42 AM AEST
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Like that ending! Kill 'em with kindness, as they say. This flowed along well, and you got your emotions out, and let your point be known.
Nicely done Angel.
Scorp. |
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