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The boy who cried love
Contributed by
sorryiforgot2smile
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:58:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wind was howling but the seconds they lasted
Consumed by your arms I've become unfolded and tragic
and fantasically average
and tragically spastic
and undoubtebly plastic
this could serve as the last passage to a life that's been passively passive....
But I admire your strength you keep me going on you keep me fighting on after the fire...
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sorryiforgot2smile
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2004-11-08 00:58:12]
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Re: The boy who cried love
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:02:48 AM AEST
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Wow, Good write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The boy who cried love
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by girish on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:58:13 AM AEST
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nice write
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Re: The boy who cried love
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by AsILayDying on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:00:19 PM AEST
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| This is really good I like your style |
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