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Inconsiderate
Contributed by
Hollie85
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You knew exactly how I felt,
but that didn’t stop you from hurting me.
You lied and said we were through,
but that didn’t stop me loving you.
You called three days down the track,
and decided you wanted me back.
You said you’d been so miserable,
and that all you could think of was me.
How could you be so inconsiderate?
If you truly love me with all your heart,
how could you take mine and tear it apart.
I said I’d give you another chance,
but that you’d have to me good to me.
I cried and you told me not to be sad,
but I said they were tears of joy.
I know I’m stupid to take you back,
and hope that everything works out.
I still am scared that it’s not for real,
and that I’ll wake up and you’ll be gone.
How could you be so inconsiderate?
If you truly love me with all your heart,
how could you take mine and tear it apart.
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Hollie85
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2004-11-07 23:46:32]
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Re: Inconsiderate
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:18:40 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
The sad thing is u r probably right but only God knows.
I know things never got better for me the second or third time around.
Thing is is how much u wonna wait.
I wish u joy, peace, luv, faith, hope, peace,
emy |
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Re: Inconsiderate
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by venkat on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:19:42 AM AEST
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| so much love..well done. venkat |
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Re: Inconsiderate
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by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:08:18 AM AEST
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If someone shred's your heart and soul once never ever let them get near you again!!
Great write!! Keep Posting! |
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