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In Me
Contributed by
Red_October
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you say 'Sorry'
I still feel you unapologetic
seduced expression
such an infatuation of you
and your unspoken
I love your freestyle chance
taken when you think you can
for sake of saving
my panic dramatic
epidemic
defenses like I wasn't free
to move without you there
And I try not to talk
small or reduce the big picture
projections of paranoia
where I'm not allowed to join you
and if I was your afflictions
acutally, I would be
that bad part of you
and not the heart of your house
in me
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Red_October
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2004-11-07 20:17:38]
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Re: In Me
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by arden on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:41:50 PM AEST
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i really liked this.
very interesting and made me ponder. nicely written. great poem. 5 stars
Arden |
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Re: In Me
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:10:54 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: In Me
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by TedHuggableBare on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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| Loved the thought process with this poem. It was a bit abstract while still leaving a certain message, good job! |
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Re: In Me
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by pixie on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:23:35 PM AEST
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great write, truly great write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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