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I Try
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to be stronger
I try to be
but I'm collapsing
I don't want to need you
but I do
Fully aware
I feel the truth
The hesitation surfaces
when I pour my heart out
onto you
I trust you with me
It's a dangerous high
You have so much potential
to alter my life
Scarcely providing enough
to survive
I hate repeating myself
but it keeps me alive
Fully aware
of limitations to you
I try to stop
pouring my heart out to you
I try to be stronger
but I still want you here
I don't want to need you
but I do, Dear...
Copyright ©
Red_October
... [
2004-11-07 20:12:19]
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Re: I Try
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by taryn on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:22:11 PM AEST
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| This poem is very deep and well thought out. great write! |
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Re: I Try
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:46:03 PM AEST
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| This Poem is very good and deep so much feelings Great Write ! |
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Re: I Try
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:48:22 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: I Try
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:38:58 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem very nicely composed.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: I Try
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 02:24:15 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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