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Light of my Wild Tornado
Contributed by
Ethereal_Engine
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:44:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Gray skies my black broken ground lays in waste. Slicing through my murky skyward shadow a burst of radiating mass plunges into the gray midmorning abyss bending the clouds like the shaft of a wild tornado. It rushes towards my wasteland losing thrust the closer it comes. Stopping near the horizon there shines a light at the end growing to impossible luminosities thinning the churning deluge that is the clouds. A roaring snap rings out as the membrane is burst and the light is let through. Rapidly the tornado disintegrates being replaced with a pillar of light. At contact with charcoal sodden ground my world shines a light I've never seen.
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Re: Light of my Wild Tornado
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by Red_October on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:23:35 PM AEST
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| This is an amazing write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Light of my Wild Tornado
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:18:15 PM AEST
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| It's a good write. I'd like to see it written out in lines and stanzas. Reading one long line gives me no idea where your stopping points are. But I like it enough to encourage you to rewrite it poem style. Cheers! |
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Re: Light of my Wild Tornado
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:29:27 AM AEST
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| very original. |
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