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this place??????(revised)
Contributed by
shepdog1972
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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Generation
Bruised fate....Destiny.....Glycerine
Karma
Confined to my own thoughts
Confined to thoughts that are uncomprehensible,
shadowed by fear thats not real
I awake up alone although you still there
A memory blankets my mind like a.......
Where do i go from here?
afraid to be happy
childhood tragedy
Afraid to go on ....afraid to stay
Copyright ©
shepdog1972
... [
2002-11-20 03:20:00]
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Re: this place??????(revised)
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:26:10 AM AEST
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| Nicely done,very creative way to type this up! I liked it! Christina |
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Re: this place??????(revised)
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:38:49 AM AEST
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| i catching twinges of filter and bush in your words, yet you poetically fling about your words in a beautiful way. i like it! kudos!! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: this place??????(revised)
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:10:19 PM AEST
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Well this is very creative, i wasnt
sure where it took me when i was
reading it, i had to read it 3 times
It's beautiful, Thanks for sharing
this one , Keep em' coming shep..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: this place??????(revised)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST
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Interesting!! Loved the form.
Jenni |
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Re: this place??????(revised)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 08:33:19 PM AEST
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Sad but very creative.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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