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my WORST enemy
Contributed by
LJ
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I know my enemy well
Her very story I could tell
Every secret she conceals
I could easily reveal
She is rotten to the core
Nasty little skanky whore
Mean as all can be
I wish everyone could see
She is gifted with a sting
She will only leave you hurting
So don’t take her as a friend
You’ll be better in the end
I’ve had to deal with her debris
It has brought me to my knees
I warned them, oh how I did
The truth from them was hid
Thinking they were the exception
Till pains real conception
They kept going
Naive and unknowing
She has a crafty disguise
That only I don’t buy
I see through her façade
Watching everyone applaud
They don’t see her reality
They don’t see my enemy
The real her only I can see
For my worst enemy is me
Copyright ©
LJ
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2002-11-20 03:00:00]
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:02:04 AM AEST
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| "it's no surprise to me i am my own worst enemy... cuz every now and then i kick the living **** out of me..." lol, i just had to, this reminded me so much of that song by Lit!! but this on it's own is very good!! beautiful! i love it! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by Ryanchandler on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:17:26 AM AEST
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| The ending really surprised me. Really crafty writing, excellent! |
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by me_n_me_alone on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:38:44 AM AEST
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| Great write LJ!!! I can relate because that is how I feel about myself. |
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by Nessiecat on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:42:03 AM AEST
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Hey, Nessiecat here,
I can't believe this, but I posted a peom with the same title and more or less the same message last night!
I'm stunned!
Maybe we have great minds lol |
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by Justice3310 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:08:01 AM AEST
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Great write it feels good to express our anger at times you have great talent in the way you express.........Great write
Justice |
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Re: my WORST enemy
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:07:10 PM AEST
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This is sad really, it made me
think alot about myself and how i am
I know that i am my own worst enemy
as well..This is a good write, it gave me
alot to think about as well. Thanks for
sharing this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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